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IELTS Writing Task 2

PROMPT: In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move out of large cities and into regional areas. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?


Video Tutorial: 24 min.

Writer's Native Country: Vietnam

Score: Band 5.5

Points discussed:

  • Writing effective introductions
  • :Thesis development
  • Vocabulary usage and clarity
  • :Parallelism in writing
  • Addressing counterarguments
  • Proper use of :transitional phrases
  • Importance of simple language
  • Crafting a strong conclusion
  • Importance of clear argument and word choice
  • Planning response before writing
  • Logical problem in argument impacting score
  • More content needed in conclusion

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