Feedback: IELTS Writing Task 2 - Advantages and Disadvantages (Urbanization) 🇻🇳

William Fitzpatrick -

Video Tutorial: 24 min.

Writer's Native Country: Vietnam

Score: Band 5.5

Points discussed:

  • Writing effective introductions
  • :Thesis development
  • Vocabulary usage and clarity
  • :Parallelism in writing
  • Addressing counterarguments
  • Proper use of :transitional phrases
  • Importance of simple language
  • Crafting a strong conclusion
  • Importance of clear argument and word choice
  • Planning response before writing
  • Logical problem in argument impacting score
  • More content needed in conclusion