Feedback: IELTS Writing Task 2 - Agree or Disagree (Road Safety) 🇻🇳

William Fitzpatrick -

Video Tutorial: 36 min.

Writer's Native Country: Vietnam

Points discussed:

  • Importance of strong introduction
  • Avoid using "on the one hand" and "on the other hand" as :transition adverbs between paragraphs
  • :Coherence and cohesion: organize sentences with :old information at the beginning and new information at the end
  • Keep vocabulary simple and clear
  • Use appropriate countable and non-countable terms (fewer vs. less)
  • Sentence structure: non-restrictive relative clauses and reductions