Video Duration: 15 min.
Native Country of Student: Sri Lanka
Rating:
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Task Achievement: 6 Coherence & Cohesion: 6 Grammatical Range & Accuracy: 6 Lexical Resources: 7 |
🧑🏫 About the Lesson
In this lesson, William reviews and rates an essay that was written by a Sri Lankan student in response to the IELTS Writing Task 2 prompt:
In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.
What are the reasons for this?
By the end of this lesson you'll be able to:
- Develop :coherence and cohesion through effective use of topic sentences, paragraphs, and :sentence connectors;
- Respond to the task fully by using a Do What/With What chart;
- Identify some common mistakes in :complex sentences and :sentence fragments;
- Distinguish between academic and everyday, spoken :registers.